About to hatch writing





i am seeing a huge boulder that is sitting on the beach motionless.

There's a lot of little cracks around the boulder.As i am walking around the big boulder.The waves were crashing up on the big boulder.Then the waves made the cracks disappear.It was round. It was big it was very weird i got a shivering feeling that i shouldn't be here.There was a weird sound coming from it but it sounded like it was coming from all around the boulder

There was a weird sound coming from it.But it sounded like it was coming from all around the boulder.So i walk around the rock i saw nothing so i went and ate my lunch and i come back and it is gone i didn't know if it was a living thing.I looked around the boulder i knocked on it.Then it cracked open and green ooze came out of it.


I can smell the green ooze that came out.It really was annoying i didn’t know what to do.Also i keep get the horrible taste of the sea salt water.A big wave was coming from the sea so i started to run back to the car.I saw the rock and then the water took over the rock and then!.It was all fix up but something was still wrong after about 5 minutes.I knew what it was know there was another 5 of them sitting there.

I can feel lots of different things as i slip and slide down the road and then i get pinched by a crab AWWWW! I scream i fight the pain i got to the rock then i knock on it and nothing happens then i kick and i punch it and nothing else happens i go around the rocks and try it on all of them
And nothing happens i go back to the first one i knock on it again and then it crack open and it made me sneeze.Blue ooze is coming out of it coming out of it now.

I can taste the sand as i slipped over.On the sand as i walked in the boulder. I look inside after the ooze finished coming out of it.Here was something in there and it look like a regular bubble.I tryed to pop it i touch it it didn’t pop.I had a pin in my pocket i tryed to pop the bubble with that but it didn't work.I went out of the boulder and grab a rock o wait the a crab again AWWWWWWW.It pinched me again i found a real rock and i tryed to pop it and then it pop.

Then i went home for the rest of the day. By Kade

the wetlands trip

16.6.16

WALT describe a new zealand habitat and the animal who live there

Room 5 went to the Wetlands trip we saw lots of animals that live there like pukeko,mallard duck
paradise duck,waterboatman,red laval and lots of bush birds there is also something call a food
chain it start of with the producers,primary consumers,secondary consumers and decomposer.

The pukeko help save the wetlands because when it is duck shooting season the pukeko go there so they do not get hurt.We also got to use sieve to get lots of water boatmen backswimmers red laval there is lots more of all of these things.We used binoculars to see all of the birds that live there.There were some really ugly duck and birds some of them were so fat they couldn't not even fly.

my ocean writing

8.6.16

WALT.Describe a New Zealand habitat and the animals who live here

My habitat is the ocean it is a lovely place filled with saltwater where lots of animals live in the ocean like fish, dolphins, sharks, jellyfish, kelp and coral. There are lots of rocks underwater as well as caves and little mountains.

Hector Dolphins are one of the best known of the four dolphins in the genus cephalorhynchus group.They are is the only endemic cetacean to live in New Zealand.They are approximately 1.4 m in length.They are one of the smallest dolphins. Many Hector Dolphins live in Akaroa harbour because they stay in warm water so sharks do not attacked.

Jellyfish of the world are such effective ocean wanderers that they haven't changed very much and jellyfish move with their strings.Some jellyfish are bigger than a human.Jellyfish have been on earth longer than dinosaurs.The jellyfish is made out of water and protein. Jellyfish live in the ocean because it is where they are raised

There are 400 different species of sharks and only 3 of them like to eat humans and these are the most deadliest shark like the tiger shark the bull shark and the great white shark.Of the hundreds of sharks of shark species there are 3 most often impacted in unprovoked shark attacks humans.  Sharks live in New Zealand waters because they do not like warm water

Dont let the pigeons drive the bus

10.10.16 WALT I am trying to persuade the reader to agree with me.
Don't let the pigeons drive the bus.
[Jonathan]Because the pigeons does not know how to drive a bus.
[Cayden]And it does not have a license.
[kade]It did not go to school to learn how to drive a bus.
Why pigeons should not drive a bus.


Pigeons should not drive the bus because they did not go to driving school + people are still trying to teach dogs to drive it will be about 10 years later.But there are still good things they could use a car that does not need someone drive on the wheel plus people can create a car that does not need people or birds pushing the pedals or driving the wheel.


Pigeons Should not drive the bus because they do not have hands and they do not have their driver's license. And they need to learn to drive and not business on the driver’s seats.they need to be potty trained.But they should reach the pedals with their stuben legs  and they can get someone to steer the bus.


Pigeons should drive the bus because everyone and everything gets a try at most things in their life.they can learn how to drive the bus people will just need to make a school for pigeons that teaches pigeons to drive buss.Like a type of school it's like when you are getting your drivers licence of people.


By Kade.