Persuade writing

Oaklands Future School and uniform for  oaklands

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W.A.L.T persuade the reader to agree with you.We should have trampolines at school because it is very good for exercise.

I think the positives of having trampolines at oaklands school are...

1 you get very fit.

2 It is very fun.

3 You can have lots of friends to do it with you.

4it helps you learn more.

5it refreshes your brain.

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I think the negatives of having trampolines at oaklands school are...

1 safety people could fall out.

2 if too many people are on the bottom it could rip.

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How i think to fix the negatives fix the negatives...

1 only have 2 of 3 people on at a time.

2 don't do tricks only do it if you have permission.

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How to get the money

Have a PJ day gold coin donation.

Have a bake sale selling cakes for 1 of 2 dollars

And all of the school in christchurch get one million dollars to redesign their school E.G. halswell school.

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Don't let the pigeons drive the bus

10.10.16 WALT I am trying to persuade the reader to agree with me.

Don't let the pigeons drive the bus.

Why pigeons should not drive a bus.

Pigeons should not drive the bus because they did not go to driving school + people are still trying to teach dogs to drive.It will be about 10 years later.But there are still good things they could use a car that does not need someone drive on the wheel plus people can create a car that does not need people or birds pushing the pedals or driving the wheel.

Pigeons should not drive the bus because they do not have hands and they do not have their driver's license.They need to learn to drive and not do their business on the driver’s seats.They need to be potty trained.But they should reach the pedals with their stubby legs  and they can get someone to steer the bus.

Pigeons should drive the bus because everyone and everything gets a try at most things in their life.They can learn how to drive the bus.People will just need to make a school for pigeons that teaches pigeons to drive busess .Like a type of school it's like when you are getting your drivers licence for people.

By Kade

First 2 weeks of school

Why ms Williams is so awesome

Because she is so nice when we are doing work.

How to use the care values in your life

You do what you have to do on technology.

What learning means to you

What it means to me is getting my work done.

Something we have talked about or learnt that made you go 'aha'

That happened when I was trying to get connected to the connection.  (linewise)

Recount writing

Here is my writing about my recount

I am learning to use comic book

Made with "ComicBook!" iPad app

adjectives and nouns

WALT add adjectives to nouns

1.The museum, big and quiet, and roomy had lots of things.

2.The mountain, small and long, had a big tunnel.

3. The fast jet plane, sped through the air.

4. The fat, empty room was very bright.

ANZAC

ANZAC is about hundreds of soldiers died in Gallipoli they had to walk threw water. It had been 24H
460 people ka